8 Jun
2001
8 Jun
'01
1:29 p.m.
I am just looking at this and changing the english a bit.
but wrt "handful" in:
The course ran from October 2000 to mid June 2001, and was taken by a handful of good (undergraduate) students: Sara Bonini, Andrea Pescetti, Elisa Ricci, and Tatiana Zolo (more on <A HREF="@ROOT@People">PeoPLe</A>).
this is a strange way to talk about a group of "good" students! ;) You (Roberto) must have big hands! ;) It is not really wrong, but... Could I change it to "four" or a "few" or "several"? Maybe, better and more expressively "a select group".
ciao, Pat
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On Fri, 8 Jun 2001, Roberto Bagnara wrote:
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> Pat, can you please make it look like English?
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